My Terrible Horrible No Good Very Bad Day

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by ApplePeaches (If the zone bbs was a drug, I'd need rehab.) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 0:24:58

This happened to me in the Third grade.
I had a terrible horrible no good very bad day. It first started in morning
care when I was having my breakfast. I was eating cerial and it was mixed
with nuts and raisins. I didn't have time to finish my breakfast because it
was time to leave. Then it was the end of the day and I had a hard time
getting my books in my book bag so I bit my backpack. My teacher told
me to go to the principal's office, and explain to her why I bit my book bag.
I told her I would stop, and I would be good. After a few minutes, she
didn't send me, but she did say that if I am having a hard time getting my
books in my book bag, I ask for help, I don't bite book bags. And then
when I was in after care, I didn't know which homework was my math and
my reading, so I was crying. So I did not have a good day. The next day,
however, we had a snow day, so that was definitely a positive thing.

Post 2 by CrystalSapphire (Uzuri uongo ndani) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 9:06:13

what was the point of this?

Post 3 by DevilishAnthony (Just go on and agree with me. You know you want to.) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 9:32:49

The point was to make you ask what the point was. See how well it worked?

Post 4 by Shepherdwolf (I've now got the bronze prolific poster award! now going for the silver award!) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 9:36:55

This has to be a joke. And never mind that the title of the thread is a riff off a children's book.

Post 5 by CrystalSapphire (Uzuri uongo ndani) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 12:13:22

lol Anthony

Post 6 by Westcoastcdngrl (move over school!) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 12:21:35

Isn't this the title of a CHILDREN'S book?

My little brother read it when he was a kid.

Post 7 by ApplePeaches (If the zone bbs was a drug, I'd need rehab.) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 14:22:35

Yes, and that was where I got that from because it was a bad day. This
stuff really happened.

Post 8 by SilverLightning (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 15:13:09

I'm just gonna say two things. First, if you're gonna use that many adjectives,
you should have more than two things that went wrong. You had a bad
breakfast and you bit a bookbag. The first is just boring, and the second makes
you look stupid. Neither are all that bad. Second, what in the world gives you
the impression that anyone on here cares about what happened to you in the
third grade? You could put this up on facebook for only your very best friend to
see and they still wouldn't care. Its aprepo of nothing, germane to nothing, and
just makes it seem like you're typing just to make sure your keyboard works.

Post 9 by VioletBlue (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 15:17:28

I was hoping no one would respond to this one! Geez!

Post 10 by Remy (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 16:44:08

You all have nobody to blame but yourselves ... and now me,for adding to the count. And yet I can't get more than a few comments on creative stuff I post here. Balls, balls I say. :P There's probably a lesson in here somewhere.

Post 11 by johndy (I just keep on posting!) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 17:22:07

Um, see, once when I was in second grade I got snapped with a rubber band. It's true. It really happened.

Post 12 by ApplePeaches (If the zone bbs was a drug, I'd need rehab.) on Sunday, 06-Dec-2015 21:48:04

Ho ho ho Merry Christmas!
Well 3 bad things happened. I didn't get to finish my breakfast. I bit my
book bag because I was frustrated. And I didn't know which homework
assignment was which. The lessons learned are to stop and think if you have
a problem, do things a little faster when you have time constraints, and
develop a better system for organizing papers.

Post 13 by VioletBlue (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 5:48:16

I can't believe they put one such as you in mainstream classes. A third grader should be beyond biting anything but food! You were and still are a little savage! Well, maybe you aren't so little, now, I am glad not to know.

Post 14 by forereel (Just posting.) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 8:20:55

Smile. Loved it. Made us post. Lol.
Keep em coming.
Thrird graders are not predictable VioletBlue dear. Do you have babies?

Post 15 by write away (The Zone's Blunt Object) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 13:27:06

I hope you never aspire to become a writer. First, your story sucks (and we get further confirmation that your nuts... who bites a bookbag... really?) lol. Second, did you know it's illegal to plagerize? do me a favor: show us how dumb you really are... do you know what the word "plagerize" means?
lol
Yes, I'm actually waiting for my driver right now, so I'm killing time by posting here.

Post 16 by sia fan bp (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 13:42:11

hahaha, bernadetta! seriously though, who bites a book bag? A little
kindergardener would but a third grader? I never did that. yes, I got
frusterated but I never would bite anything unless it was candy. :d

Post 17 by DevilishAnthony (Just go on and agree with me. You know you want to.) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 13:48:28

When she becomes a famous writer, she'll look back on this board and remember all the love and support she got from it. lmao

Post 18 by forereel (Just posting.) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 13:59:36

Sho ya right. Lol

Post 19 by Flidais (WISEST IS SHE WHO KNOWS THAT SHE DOES NOT KNOW) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 14:38:28

So my only question here was were you trying to write a story here or just recount an event in which case I need to move the topic. Thanks!

Post 20 by sia fan bp (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 15:17:30

hahahaha, anthony! lol! look at all the support! not.

Post 21 by LeoGuardian (You mean there is something outside of this room with my computer in it?) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 15:54:50

How do you remember what you did in third grade? I mean an entire day?
Lol I find it unbelievable you'd be sent to the principal for biting your own book bag. Take it from one who spent some time in the principal's office, late 70s though so it's a different era.

I wouldn't know, but would venture a guess book bags probably taste better if you sprinkle them with a bit of salt and pepper first.

Lol you didn't bite your damned bag, unless someone dared you to.

Post 22 by forereel (Just posting.) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 16:31:18

Now, now Leo. You have a little girl, and you know how little girls are.
They do stuff like that. Mind did. Lol

Post 23 by LeoGuardian (You mean there is something outside of this room with my computer in it?) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 16:43:36

True. Bite, pull, kick, scream.
Then when they get bigger they say "That's nopt okay".

Post 24 by write away (The Zone's Blunt Object) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 16:59:50

Leo, they sent her to the principle's office because she's nuts. They thought she might start biting herself or other students--or their backpacks--next. lol

Post 25 by AgateRain (Believe it or not, everything on me and about me is real!) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 17:29:47

I didn't bite my bag, like ever, so not sure what the fuck.

Post 26 by Remy (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 17:52:58

As a writer myself, I would politely request, Apple that you please post non-writing topics in the appropriate boards. Writers' block is a place for one's wrighting. Please.

Post 27 by forereel (Just posting.) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 20:22:10

Maybe not bite your book bag, but... Lol
Boys are bad differently, but girls do some interesting things.

Post 28 by write away (The Zone's Blunt Object) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 21:46:40

Umm I never bit my bookbag either. I, would have thought that was nuts, even when I was eight. lol.

Post 29 by LeoGuardian (You mean there is something outside of this room with my computer in it?) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 22:56:36

I'd still be surprised a teacher would notice let alone care. I mean, tying the
girl's pigtails to her chair? Or putting an egg timer under the teacher's chair and
setting it? Or putting a frog in er desk? Sure, that's stuff will get you taken by
the back of the shirt and hauled down to the principal's office, or having to write
some horrid number of times "I will not disrupt class with my behavior" or
something to that effect. I'd have thought someone biting their own bag would
be nothing for a teacher to have concerned themselves with. That is the part I
found unbelievable. At the age she was at, you've got boys throwing spit wads,
girls pinching, kids throwing chalkboard erasers, etc. So biting one's own bag,
while a bit odd, doesn't seem like something a teacher would care about.

Post 30 by write away (The Zone's Blunt Object) on Monday, 07-Dec-2015 23:56:08

nah, they care leo. They need something to label one mentally disturbed or ADHD or whatever these days. lol. And in this case, I'm not so sure I'd disagree with them if they did. haha

Post 31 by forereel (Just posting.) on Tuesday, 08-Dec-2015 0:04:15

Depends on how she was biting her bag.
Remember she couldn't get the books in it, so she probably tossed them on the floor, and just hauled off and bit that bag.
Visually, that be her getting upset.
Kind of like stomping your feet and screaming.
Teachers don't need audio to see the student is out of hand, or sorts. Lol

Post 32 by johndy (I just keep on posting!) on Tuesday, 08-Dec-2015 5:44:31

It all seems pretty silly to me.

Post 33 by forereel (Just posting.) on Tuesday, 08-Dec-2015 8:47:19

Little girls are silly. Smile.
Lovable though.

Post 34 by LeoGuardian (You mean there is something outside of this room with my computer in it?) on Tuesday, 08-Dec-2015 9:50:58

Wayne's right, which is why we fool dads let 'em get away with a lot, too much, if you were to ask my daughter's mom.

Post 35 by forereel (Just posting.) on Tuesday, 08-Dec-2015 11:59:14

Ah, yes.
"I'm not talking today." Okay fine.
"Why isn't anyone talking to me?"
*grin*

Post 36 by Voyager (I just keep on posting!) on Tuesday, 08-Dec-2015 14:13:55

My brother ate the corner off one of our Braille picture books but he was seriously autistic and probably six years old at the time.

Post 37 by ApplePeaches (If the zone bbs was a drug, I'd need rehab.) on Wednesday, 09-Dec-2015 16:10:30

Natalie, I was trying to write a story. Since that is the case, I am guessing it
is on the right board; it's just a little short. I know what it means to
plajorize. It means to copy someone's work without giving them credit. I
didn't plajorize here though. And teachders do care; they have this way
where they act like they know everything.

Post 38 by Flidais (WISEST IS SHE WHO KNOWS THAT SHE DOES NOT KNOW) on Wednesday, 09-Dec-2015 16:52:23

Yep, thanks for the clarification. That's why I asked.

Post 39 by forereel (Just posting.) on Wednesday, 09-Dec-2015 16:52:25

No, didn't do that.

Post 40 by Shepherdwolf (I've now got the bronze prolific poster award! now going for the silver award!) on Wednesday, 09-Dec-2015 17:21:43

The title is plagiarism, ApplePeaches. The story is creative nonfiction.

Post 41 by write away (The Zone's Blunt Object) on Wednesday, 09-Dec-2015 19:31:23

You call that creative greg? lol

Post 42 by write away (The Zone's Blunt Object) on Wednesday, 09-Dec-2015 19:33:14

And Kristen, actualy, you sure did plagerize. Copying a title is the most blatant, as well as the dumbest form of plagerism I've ever seen. lol. I mean, all one has to do is glance at the title to spot it. A sleeping baboon would notice that. lol.

Post 43 by Shepherdwolf (I've now got the bronze prolific poster award! now going for the silver award!) on Wednesday, 09-Dec-2015 19:49:50

Creative in the same way that trying to gain enlightenment by shoving a fork through a head of lettuce and then juggling it with your feet while hand-walking across a glass floor on a rainy day in July in Cuba is creative.
It's basically nonsensical and pointless, but it falls in the category of creative nonfiction.

Post 44 by Shepherdwolf (I've now got the bronze prolific poster award! now going for the silver award!) on Wednesday, 09-Dec-2015 20:18:09

Also, just another note:
It's not p-l-a-j-o-r-i-z-e, although with the way the word is said, that spelling lkinda makes sense.
It's p-l-a-g-i-a-r-i-z-e.

Post 45 by sia fan bp (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Wednesday, 09-Dec-2015 20:31:50

Hmm, leo, I kinda agree with you. Yet... I did run out of class once crying.
Not biting people or biting book bags. and kristin, I'm curious... how old are
you? This is not older people's stuff to post. And, dang, you actually
remember everything that happened in the third grade? wow. I left those
days like I left that middle school.

Post 46 by sia fan bp (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Wednesday, 09-Dec-2015 20:47:01

middle/elementarry school. I liked it, don't get me wrong. but, the little kid
stuff... I used to get angry for nothing. Maybe I still do? *blushes* anyways,
pointless. I'm posting cuz I'm bored. :d

Post 47 by Reyami (I've broken five thousand! any more awards going?) on Thursday, 10-Dec-2015 1:57:41

Look at her apple paper topic. i'm shocked she was not thrown out of college for improper source citation and plagiarism. No professor or English teacher would give a passing grade for such crappy work. I'm not the best writer myself, but I at least make an attempt at trying to cite things properly. this is absolute nonsense on her part.

Post 48 by sia fan bp (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Thursday, 10-Dec-2015 9:50:54

I agree, Remy. I am not allowed to plagerize in high school and I'm pretty sure
that you're not supposed to plagerize in college either.

Post 49 by CrystalSapphire (Uzuri uongo ndani) on Thursday, 10-Dec-2015 12:20:28

You will get kicked out of college if you do.

Post 50 by forereel (Just posting.) on Thursday, 10-Dec-2015 14:34:43

You're a really girl Sia. Smile.

Post 51 by sia fan bp (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Thursday, 10-Dec-2015 15:23:24

thanks wayne! :d

Post 52 by ApplePeaches (If the zone bbs was a drug, I'd need rehab.) on Thursday, 10-Dec-2015 22:06:20

I did not plagirize here. If one of you were to copy what I wrote and put it
on another board claiming it was something that you wrote, then it would be
plagirism. I am 23 Marilyn. I remember elementary school very well...I have a
memory like an elephant.

Post 53 by Shepherdwolf (I've now got the bronze prolific poster award! now going for the silver award!) on Thursday, 10-Dec-2015 22:16:06

Plagiarism, unfortunately, isn't just defined as ripping someone off. In an academic setting, it also is defined by not citing sources.
You plagiarized when you wrote the topic of this thread. You didn't claim you wrote that book, and the contents were not from that book as far as I know, so you may have been attempting nothing but humour. But still.

Post 54 by ApplePeaches (If the zone bbs was a drug, I'd need rehab.) on Friday, 11-Dec-2015 0:57:55

No, it was not plagirism! There could be content that has the same title but
the ideas are totally different. For example, there is a Song called What
about Now by Daughtry and a song by Lonestar called What about Now.
That doesn't mean that Daughtry plagirized; he had the same title, but the
ideas for their songs were totally different.

Post 55 by Shepherdwolf (I've now got the bronze prolific poster award! now going for the silver award!) on Friday, 11-Dec-2015 1:16:33

The phrase "what about now" is a good deal more innocuous than "My Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day".
If two artists wrote a song with the same name and very similar lyrics, one would probably sue the other for plagiarism.
You wrote a story about a terrible day you had, cribbed the title of a children's book about a terrible day either in homage or parody. That's basically plagiarism.
I doubt like hell the author of that book ever comes here, much less would give a rip about you borrowing the title...but if nothing else it makes you look very unoriginal, as well as a bit soft in the attic if we add in your actual story itself.

Post 56 by Reyami (I've broken five thousand! any more awards going?) on Friday, 11-Dec-2015 1:55:12

and FYI, plagiarism has an A between the i and the r.

Post 57 by CrystalSapphire (Uzuri uongo ndani) on Friday, 11-Dec-2015 8:10:46

lol daily dose of amusement!

Post 58 by forereel (Just posting.) on Friday, 11-Dec-2015 11:02:30

Guess I aut to really read this book. Everyone else seems to have. Smile.

Post 59 by sia fan bp (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Friday, 11-Dec-2015 11:12:37

hmm, never read it but wasn't there a movie about it? about this guy who
seriously loved australia and always ended up having a very bad day? hmm,
yup, plagiarism. you coppied and pasted on the paper topic. and this...
wow...

Post 60 by ApplePeaches (If the zone bbs was a drug, I'd need rehab.) on Friday, 11-Dec-2015 15:35:10

Yeah you probably could find someone reading it if you look on youtube, and I
forget the author of that book.

Post 61 by loves animals (This site is so "educational") on Sunday, 13-Dec-2015 6:09:19

wow and what fun this was to read and to me it seemed as though a child had written this and I've not heard of this title before or even read the book either.

Post 62 by forereel (Just posting.) on Sunday, 13-Dec-2015 12:13:28

Guess we learned the Zone reads children's books. Didn't we? Smile.

Post 63 by ApplePeaches (If the zone bbs was a drug, I'd need rehab.) on Sunday, 13-Dec-2015 12:21:21

Lol